Monday, February 11, 2008

Time Stops For No Mouse

It is about a mouse who's name is Hermux he is a watchmaker and one day a mouse named Ms.Perflinger came in to Hermux's shop and ask's to get her watch fixed by tomorrow at noon. At noon the next day she didn't come a week after a guy that say's he's come to pick up the watch tries to take it but Hermux wouldn't let him. The guy looked suspisos so Hermux followed him he stopped at Ms.Perflinger's house and say the guy take a sleepy Ms.Perflinger out of the house and put her in a limo. He called his friend pup and they made a plan to save Ms.Perflinger. Hermux went to a hotel and talked with Dr.Mennus. Mennus later caught Hermux and tied him up and put him in a trap. He also did the same with Perflinger. One of Hermux's freiends came and saved him and Ms.Perflinger. After that they both went home happy.

1 comment:

Marian said...

Did you like the book, runescapeman10?

and ... few other things:
** I have noticed a lot of(compare with your past posts) grammar errors in this post. For instance:
1. "ask's" or "say's" . Would check on this, please?

2. "freiends" for friends, which seems to be from too much speed in typing.